Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Take Heed Lil' One

I thank thee
for remembering
and keeping me
very close to heart

A thanks of sort
to make me realise
I could rock your world
for I did not know I could

You've whispered Anger
Cried Hatred
Showed Vengeance

I began to wonder
Why?
Insecurity?
Boredom?
Surely out of jealousy!

Achtung!

Fall you may one day
but don't blame me

I am in no mood to play
surely not with you

have you not notice
that years ago
I stopped
and took a bow

patience
is not my virtue
tho I have been
patiently ignoring you

take heed lil one
i might one day
grant your wish
and make your life
a living misery


p/s: darling, be very careful of what you wish for....

7 comments:

Labyrinth said...

ni untuk zahir ke? hehe

The bubur caca lover.... said...

it may sound like it, but it's not. sorry, del. try again. haha

wei, awalnya post comment..
i'm in the midst of editing nih!
come back later for the edited version.kahkahkah~

--<@maya@>-- said...

romantika sekali.. ;)

The bubur caca lover.... said...

u think so???!!???

Ahmad Zahirudin said...

Ha! Untuk Musfiza?

Ahmad Zahirudin said...

Of course it's romantic. "Romantic" is from the heart. It is also "Semantic", but very subjective.

But still, I think it's better than good.

Why don't you add it to poetrypuisi.blogspot.com? I can add you as a contributor if you want.

The bubur caca lover.... said...

zahir, guess again.
u wanna add this rambling of mine into poetrypuisi.standard poetrypuisi terlampau tinggi untuk sajak meraban i ni...